Memorial
By Rhiannonw
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Millstone becalmed, stock-still
above the cove;
sculpted walls surround
– long ground by wind and weather –
and these remains remind
of grinding roar,
revolving stone,
the busy scene
of days before
the last old miller passed away:
in-coming carts
with harvest yields
from fruitful fields,
converted into flour
for winter farmhouse
kitchen kneading,
feeding
the labourers on the land:
memorial
to bygone tale
of bustling vale –
no need for carved, engraved
inscription etched,
the stones themselves
upon imagination
the history have sketched.
A story caught,
made famous in the land
to those who understand
the words vernacular,
a favourite verse
in lilting language, lyrical
memorable, words melodic, musical
flowing in patterned sound like song,
pleasing:
cameo of time now gone.
The painting is by a local artist in Trefin (on the Pembrokeshire Coastal Path), J Maddocks, and the famous poem referred to (probably my most favourite poem) is by Crwys* (William Williams 1875 - 1968) and called ‘Melin Trefin’ - ‘The Mill of Trefin’ – from which I have derived many of ideas in this verse. (William Williams used to be rather a common name in Wales!)
*To pronounce ‘Crwys’ try saying ‘cooee’ without emphasising the ending, making it one syllable and adding a soft ‘s’, then add an ‘r’ after the ‘C’!
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I never really thought about
I never really thought about how much history is in a millstone, what toil and how many lives nourished by the flour. Beautiful and interesting peom, very much enjoyed Rhiannon.
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I too agree this is such a
I too agree this is such a rewarding poem that tells a part of history. I also loved the way you showed us the reader how to pronounce 'Crwys'. the Welsh language in its own right is so poetic and I admire the thought you've put into this writing.
Very much enjoyed reading Rhiannon.
Jenny.
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Hi Rhainnon
Hi Rhainnon
Lovely poem, and how nice to have the millstone as the source of the story - sort of like a gravestone telling about one's life.
Jean
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Memorial
Hi Rhiannon - It's great the way you have discovered so much folk history in a single working sculpture. Love it. Charlie
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