Out of safety to please

By Rhiannonw

Wed, 20 Jan 2021

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Cosy bulbs lie safe below,
spikes extend, begin to grow,
sure but slow
’til surface pierced,
stem strikes upward,
soon spathe breaks –
white drop droops
to shine and shiver
– speak of coming end of winter.

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Succinct but lovely. Let's

Permalink Submitted by marandina on Wed, 2021-01-20 12:41

Succinct but lovely. Let's hope winter ends soon.

Thank you. Spring is

Permalink Submitted by Rhiannonw on Wed, 2021-01-20 14:23

Thank you. Spring is approaching! Rhiannon

Thank you for cherries.

Permalink Submitted by Rhiannonw on Wed, 2021-01-20 18:57

Thank you for cherries. Rhiannon

Lovely poem Rhiannon. Jenny.

Permalink Submitted by skinner_jennifer on Wed, 2021-01-20 23:20

Lovely poem Rhiannon.

Jenny.

Thank you, Jenny. Glad you

Permalink Submitted by Rhiannonw on Thu, 2021-01-21 08:59

Thank you, Jenny. Glad you enjoyed. Rhiannon

A little bit of hope for

Permalink Submitted by Insertponceyfre... on Thu, 2021-01-21 05:55

A little bit of hope for better days to come - thank you!

Thanks, nice to see the

Permalink Submitted by Rhiannonw on Thu, 2021-01-21 09:01

Thanks, nice to see the littel reminders coming up! Rhiannon

God's promise is never more

Permalink Submitted by forest_for_ever on Fri, 2021-01-22 12:25

God's promise is never more visible than in such moments '..consider the Lilies of the field...' This is one of your most beatiful poems yet.

Thank you, Graham. Glad you

Permalink Submitted by Rhiannonw on Fri, 2021-01-22 14:27

Thank you, Graham. Glad you enjoyed. Tiny flowers give such pleasure and beauty. Rhiannon