Seeing the end from the …

Cherry

By Rhiannonw

Tue, 29 Jun 2021
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13 comments
 

Composing …

Exciting beginning –
but where is it going?t
Is the goal in view,
the end, the conclusion?
Can you follow it through,
keep the attention
you’ve grabbed,
retention of interest,
assurance that
continuing reading
will quickly be leading
to achieving a satisfying,
suprising
well-worded
elegant ending.

[IP: begnnings and endings]

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Comments

Submitted by jeand on

Hi Rhiannon

You can make a poem about anything. And this certainly tells the story for a writer.

Jean Day

Submitted by Rhiannonw on

thanks, Jean. It was  buzzing around in my head for a few days! I know some people enjoy writing a long story with no idea as yet where it is going, but I think even then they have to get a shape to the individual chapters, how to begin, end and connect the two! Rhiannon

 

Submitted by skinner_jennifer on

Hi Rhiannon,

you touched on a subject that's dear to my heart. Being able to write a story with a beginning and an end is first and foremost, because then the middle can take you anywhere. I think this was a great poem for the I P and very appropriate.

Jenny.

 

Submitted by Rhiannonw on

Thanks, Jenny. Yes, though wherever the middle wanders it's got to still hold the interest, and keep the end its aiming for in mind! Rhiannon

 

Submitted by marandina on

Nicely done, Rhiannon. A poetic journey many have experienced in so many different ways.

 

Submitted by Rhiannonw on

Thanks, yes, the contortions of thought sometimes involved only the writer knows! Rhiannon

 

Submitted by Rhiannonw on

Cherries appreciated, thank you. Rhiannon

 

Submitted by Di_Hard on

You explain it all so well :0)

 

Submitted by Rhiannonw on

It's one thing to alalyse, another to accomplish, do! Thanks. I hope you are well. Rhiannon

 

Submitted by Nolan on

Lovely little poem Rhiannon!  "Well-worded elegant ending!"

Your poems are good this one is a winner.

Nolan &&

 

Submitted by Rhiannonw on

Thank you. It was fun working on this one! Rhiannon

 

Submitted by MarciaMarcia on

And in the middle, however timed, is the journey af the piece. Well done. 
Thank you.         Marcia 

Submitted by Rhiannonw on

Thank you, again, Marcia. Yes, the middle is still very important! Know what we want to say! Rhiannon