The Softening of Storms
By Rhiannonw
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“Nut sleeps in its case,
secure its wall,
content in its comfort,
complacent and small,
effort unknown,
self-serving, alone;”
Buffeting wind,
and howling blast,
shaking the slates
and shrieking past,
heaving the trees,
and lifting with ease
the covers and clutter
and loose bits of gutter,
flinging the swing,
and slamming the shutter …;
before we had realised
just what was coming,
the pressure-whoosh spray
was thrumming and drumming,
an avalanche of spears
like cloud-bursting weirs,
drenching and scouring,
roaring and pouring …;
at last is was past,
the silence intense
grass glitters, we smile,
all’s peaceful awhile.
“awaking from shaking,
hard shell that enclosed
decaying, displaying
soft kernel exposed
– absorbing and growing,
a fruitful life flowing …”
[IP: Stormy weather]
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As I read this I can feel the
As I read this I can feel the winds shaking at my window!
Wonderful!!
Terry
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Loved.the control of words
Loved.the control of words and use of sound throughout, particularly s sounds pulling me into the environment... some lovely compounds too, cloud-bursting weirs, pressure-whoosh, excellent work :)
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Excellent poem, Rhiannon.
Excellent poem, Rhiannon. Nice to see good work duly rewarded.
Best, Luigi x
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A beautifully mastered poem
A beautifully mastered poem Rhiannon.
Jenny.
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Hi Rhiannon
Hi Rhiannon
Reading this poem really makes one feel the elements.
Jean
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