Turnabout

By Rhiannonw

Sat, 09 May 2015
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8 comments
 

He stole from others
– was a thief,
now works – can share and
bring relief.

He boozed – to others
caused much grief;
now clear-headed
life – new leaf.

‘Love God, help others’:
be our chief
joy source, through all our
journey brief.

 

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Comments

Submitted by london_calling79 on

A very comforting piece in structure, tone and in theme, Rhiannon.

 

Submitted by Rhiannonw on

Thank you, interesting you found it so. It is good to see change possible, and God can help to do so. Rhiannon

 

Submitted by Bee on

This is very neatly done, Rhiannon, and sharply gets the message across. 

Bee

Submitted by Rhiannonw on

Thanks, Bee. Glad to hear you thought so. Rhiannon

 

Submitted by Philip Sidney on

Hope for us all! :)

Submitted by Rhiannonw on

True. Always hope, and help available, and the motivation of the joy it really brings! Thanks, Rhiannon

 

Submitted by jeand on

Hi Rhiannon

I like the sign you used as your picture for this one. It is good that people can change, and good when they can recognise the need to do so.

Jean

Jean Day

Submitted by Rhiannonw on

Thanks, Jean. Yes, I liked the pic sign looking big and bold - change is a big thing, but so rewarding to everyone concerned! Rhiannon