Upgrade Resolution

By Rhiannonw

Sat, 02 Jan 2016
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6 comments
 

Tempers pizzicato
softening to legato;
sharp distortions,
character corners,
picasso-like contortions –
gentle air-brush
out the rash and brash,
sculpt and whittle
the smug and brittle,
angle the focus
away from us:
fun and kindness
woven in: attractiveness.

 [IP: resolution]

 

Certificate U
Poem
Families
Inspiration Point (work that responds to our weekly writing cue)

Comments

Submitted by loquaciousicity on

An interesting take Rhiannon...

nice poem!

Tery

Submitted by Rhiannonw on

Glad you thought so, and thanks for telling me, Terry. Rhiannon

 

Submitted by EB on

Lots of movement in this and some fun with sounds.

Submitted by Rhiannonw on

Thanks, EB. Yes, I like to play with sounds! Rhiannon

 

Submitted by jeand on

Hi Rhiannon

I enjoyed reading this and guessing what the various activities and  emotions were that the family were going through.

Jean

Jean Day

Submitted by Rhiannonw on

Hi, Jean. I put it in the 'family' collection because working on character and temper helps the friction in the family, but I think it is meant as an individual's resolution. Rhiannon