Draw Me a Better Life

By Richard L. Provencher
Mon, 09 Dec 2013
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Show me an outline
of a farm
where people wish to live
perhaps in a
nectar of woods
comforted by spruce,
and a hill crowding an
old barn --
a home ready for
laughter, with children
and chickens.
Show me lots of space --
horses prancing at freedom
in green pastures,
a gravel road
with baby blue above
and colours that capture
autumn emotion,
calico leaves dropping by.
Closing my eyes I see.
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A perfectly understated poem,
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A perfectly understated poem, brilliantly executed.
Tina
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I really liked this. Simply
I really liked this. Simply stated- and just where I'd like to be.
Bee
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This was really pleasant to
This was really pleasant to read and resonated really well struck me as honest insightful and most enjoyable
hot and buttered
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