Giddi-up Gramps

By Richard L. Provencher

Tue, 16 Oct 2012

2 comments

Try
to bear up with older
age
cusp it
try it
legs no longer rubbery
& bouncy
but slow shuffles
more likely to get
there in one piece.

Permalink Submitted by maggyvaneijk on Tue, 2012-10-16 12:36

I like how you've used structure to your advantae here, it portrays the sense of struggle very well.

Permalink Submitted by Richard L. Prov... on Tue, 2012-10-16 12:42

Hi Maggy, you're quick off the mark. Thank you so much for your insightful comment. May this day be a blessing for you and your loved ones. Richard

Richard L. Provencher