The Ocean Coughs

By Richard L. Provencher

Sat, 09 Nov 2019
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As the ocean roils

salty water coughs up

sand & pebbles

scattered in humps

aside the shore

and at times leftover

debris from ships

ahoy long times ago.

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Submitted by Tom Brown on

Richard I would suggest "washes up" instead of "coughs up". Apart from that, first-class.

Cheers! Tom Brown