Samurai
By Richard L. Provencher
Tue, 20 Oct 2020
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Raindrops turn into
a pounding surf on our
asphalt driveway
splits a pile
of autumn
leaves into scattered
colours
spaced into sectors apart
enough room
for a Samurai warrior
to complete a
fearsome dance
and the storm provides
a haven for nature’s
natural colour
and the intricate designs
of the dancer.
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what an image, lashing rain
what an image, lashing rain and sweep of a samurai sword! You evoke the storm brilliantly, from the first 3 fierce lines to the colours and slowing at the end making me think of the stillness after
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