Season's Advent

Cherry

By Richard L. Provencher

Tue, 10 Nov 2020
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6 comments
 

Dawn

is creating

silhouettes in

layers

of invitation-

 

sky’s afire

with promise

and decks  

stacked 

in lobster

pots - slatted

barriers

bait primed-

 

fishermen

anxious

lobsters

unaware

they’re

tenants to-be

in new housing.

 

 

Certificate U
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Submitted by Richard L. Prov... on

 

Richard L. Provencher

Submitted by Richard L. Prov... on

Thank you, Editors, for the cherries. Much appreciated. -Richard  L. Provencher ps. it does add a little inncentive for writers to write better. I know it has helped me. 

Richard L. Provencher

Submitted by Di_Hard on

 I LOVE  "layers of invitation" but also, how you shift meaning all through, like waves in a harbour, and end with the lobsters' point of view. It is a wonderfully satisfying poem seeming simple but with lots going on underneath (like a harbour, again) Really enjoyed!

 

Submitted by Richard L. Prov... on

Di_Hard: Your powerful words are humbly accepted. -Richard LP ps. hearing how much you liked my story-poem  is very satisfying.

 

Richard L. Provencher

Submitted by Nolan on

Your poem is lovely. Tell me can one see the the northern lights from you are in Canada? Have you? &

 

Submitted by Richard L. Prov... on

I am pleased you enjoyed this poem, Nolan. Any nice supportive comments are a great feedback.Yes, we can see the beautiful Northern Lights. Chimo.

Richard L. Provencher