My Secret Weapon

By Verity Valentine
Fri, 19 Feb 2010
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Without a doubt, when you return for more
I'll have the shirt off your back
and your belt on the floor
Meanwhile I could showcase to another boy
that hot pink body-con bliss
although my thrill is only for you to enjoy
As for my choice of song, I hope you can bare
I'll parade imprudently around the bed
so you'll be too distracted to care
Two hearts, become one
Two bodies, connect, become one
Same feelings, same intentions
I must disguise my blemishes, my pretensions.
Now I can hear you coming, you're nearly here
I can feel your vibes from my room at the front door
I'm about to see your glowing face, elight with pride
You've come to see your girl; your belt already on the floor.
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I like this - but I think
I like this - but I think you could lose the last line.
Your crit is on its way - I've just been a bit busy lately!
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Thats amazing, i love it so
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Thats amazing, i love it so much.
Noah
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