rain
By samhennig
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Rain sews stitches in your vision,
obstructed views.
Steam flows in ribbons
twisting upward from the lip
of the scummy kettle,
thick, white, hardened
like barnacles.
Rain sews stitches in your vision,
holding things together
or tearing it apart,
you can see the join,
missing what’s between.
The mug warms your hands,
rain beats, beats, beats
against the pane.
Outside great trees stretch
into the morning,
reaching; talons fetching
water, bringing
it deep into the
already sodden earth,
mud bubbling.
Rain sews stitches in your vision,
hitting glass and casting
shadows across the dimly lit room,
slowly creeping across
the cream carpet.
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This brought rain to my
This brought rain to my memory; coming home last night from the hospital in the driving rain; then out this morning finding fallen trees; rain as elemental the poem soaks my imagination in it.
Dougie Moody
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Two experiences of water in
Two experiences of water in this beautiful poem, which is Pick of the Day! Please do share if you can
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Reading this sitting under a
Reading this sitting under a glass roof while the rain rattles and rattles endlessly on - a very apt and beautiful poem, congratulations on the well earned golden cherries Sam
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