As She Sleeps; a pantoum.
By SanChonino
Mon, 19 May 2008
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Sea of cobalt, crimson sky.
She lies next to me, asleep.
Tumult grows as seagulls cry -
Fears arise and terrors creep.
She lies next to me, asleep,
Lost in worlds of white and blue.
Fears arise and terrors creep
As I scan the scarlet view.
Lost in worlds of white and blue,
Slowly she begins to stir;
As I scan the scarlet view,
Dread explodes my thoughts of her.
Slowly she begins to stir -
Thunder crashes, rain appears.
Dread explodes my thoughts of her,
Trepidation, terrors, fears.
Thunder crashes, rain appears,
Tumult grows and seagulls cry -
Trepidation, terrors, fears,
Sea of cobalt, crimson sky.
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Hey SC.... I'm not a poetry
Hey SC....
I'm not a poetry expert, but I do like this.
Welcome.
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SanChonino, I really like
SanChonino,
I really like this. I think it inspired a few of us to have a crack at writing our own pantoum.
Good to see you mate.
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