Loft space
By Sean Playfair
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One pointless day, I fell up a wormhole – clattered against the rattle
of the pull-down ladder – through the hatch, to my loft. Witnessed
the battered aftermath of my life's wheezy Armageddon. A book
I once loved, curled in the corner: a soggy, cold hedgehog. It's easy
to lose sight of the old goal, put your wistful head on, leaf through
the childhood verse that once adorned classroom walls. Boxes
of stuff it seemed wise to salvage – never nudged a second thought –
from a host of career falls. Scripts of lines nobody wanted to say,
rejected. Records, once keen to take the pain away: for a fate of
warped and murky leisure, selected. Disks of dreams: flaccid.
The story of your offspring told through bin bag and label. And if
the grit and gravel flies in your eye, burns a tear of acid, has you
hunched, reeling, starting to unravel... fear not, brave champion.
Breath. Stand straight. If you're able to turn those crates, and
that smile, upside down; ransack, like a crack-jonesing burglar,
through the infinite crap, the incomplete games and jigsaws of
your estate: You'll see a light there. A cheap strip of Morse
Code. It shines on – not what you want, but what you need.
Five little things that urge repair. After, you can return
to the landing – a hero. Changed. Poised for the next chapter.
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Full of truths and nostalgia,
Full of truths and nostalgia, you convey that 'losing yourself' to the loft really aptly and show snapshots of the meaning of life. A lovely piece. Is it 'Breathe' in line 14?
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This is so good. I hadn't
This is so good. I hadn't read your poem but was thinking of old boxes of 'stuff' myself this morning and wrote a poem. ot as warm ad rich as yours though. Funny how people have similiar ideas at the same time. Anyway - I love this.
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This is so good. I hadn't
This is so good. I hadn't read your poem but was thinking of old boxes of 'stuff' myself this morning and wrote a poem. ot as warm ad rich as yours though. Funny how people have similiar ideas at the same time. Anyway - I love this.
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