Red Wine, Suicide
By seank88
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Sad eyes looking
down
on these somber streets
of a quiet town,
Standing on a
balcony in the sky
Fourteen stories
high
Drinking red wine,
I watch people
scurry down below
I see lovers kiss
Under a park lamps
glow,
And a cab driver
yells and shakes his fist
At a drunkard
stumbling
Into the darkness;
I sip down the last
drop of wine
Then throw my glass
Into the night,
I watch it sail out
into the further
And walk inside
As I hear it
shatter,
Broken pieces
scatter on the ground
As I lay on my bed
Not making a sound,
I listen to the
glass crack over again
Over and over and
over
In my head,
With my eyes closed
I can see it very
clearly now
Bursting by the toes
of a woman in a silk gown,
I squeeze my eyes
tighter
Just to try and see
What this scene
would look like,
If the glass were me
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I don't think it would look
I don't think it would look very nice if you burst at the toes of a woman, but being bigger than a glass, I'm thinking there's a chance you might just fall on her and squash her in a mutual bursting competition. Having said that, your poem captures the feeling of possibilities you get from being high up and under the depressive influence of red wine. I liked the casual observation and throw-away detachment that comes through so well.
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