Home Read Write Forums Blogs Damaged Goods Haiku By ShannanThu, 08 May 2014 727 reads 2 comments “Why don’t men date her?” “Too much work! Self-classified: She’s damaged goods.” Certificate UPoemPoetryRomance Facebook Twitter Log in to post comments Comments ? Permalink Submitted by maisie on Thu, 2014-05-08 21:56 ARE you one syllable short in the last line? Other wise enjoyed. contact the british haiku society maisie Guess what? I'm still alive! Log in to post comments she's-da-mag-ed-goo-ds ... could be 6 in there Permalink Submitted by Shannan on Sun, 2014-05-11 11:16 I was going with the 5 she's-da-maged-goo-ds... hmmm 4 would be she's-dam-aged-goods... the goods makes or breaks it I guess. Thanks so much for commenting :-) Thanks for the suggestion... I'm not worried about the syllable or not, so won't worry a society about it ;-) Keep well $ Log in to post comments
Damaged Goods Haiku By ShannanThu, 08 May 2014 727 reads 2 comments “Why don’t men date her?” “Too much work! Self-classified: She’s damaged goods.” Certificate UPoemPoetryRomance Facebook Twitter Log in to post comments Comments ? Permalink Submitted by maisie on Thu, 2014-05-08 21:56 ARE you one syllable short in the last line? Other wise enjoyed. contact the british haiku society maisie Guess what? I'm still alive! Log in to post comments she's-da-mag-ed-goo-ds ... could be 6 in there Permalink Submitted by Shannan on Sun, 2014-05-11 11:16 I was going with the 5 she's-da-maged-goo-ds... hmmm 4 would be she's-dam-aged-goods... the goods makes or breaks it I guess. Thanks so much for commenting :-) Thanks for the suggestion... I'm not worried about the syllable or not, so won't worry a society about it ;-) Keep well $ Log in to post comments
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