Silkie Bride
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By Sikander
Sun, 08 Jan 2012
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8 comments
My new mother was born through a mouth
In the seal neck my father cut
He dug in and scooped her out
'Here,' he said
'Here is your mother to play with'
The pelt went on the fire
to spit
and crack
and dance
It's hard to play with a screaming woman
My father handed me a fish bone comb
To brush that nonsense from her hair
The teeth broke on her wet weeds
But my singing seemed to sooth her
She'll settle in and learn to stoke the fire
and gut the fish
and mend the nets
and bring water from the stream
But she'll never play with me.
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I thought this was a very
Permalink Submitted by skinner_jennifer on
I thought this was a very strange and mystical poem,
very much a like a dream. Very imaginative and
mysterious.
Jenny.
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I agree with Jenny,
Permalink Submitted by Silver Spun Sand on
I agree with Jenny, Sikander...there is something very dark and mysterious about this.
You have utilised a great deal of original imagery to the poem's full advantage.
Tina
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I think the imagery is
I think the imagery is wonderful and very original- a good poem.. well done- you should definitely enter it in the competition you mentioned..
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I too liked this a lot
I too liked this a lot sikander. It resonates very well with me at the moment both in the content and the execution. The way you have put it together forces the listener to make their own sense and meaning and in doing so you cause the distillation of the already excellent imagery. SSS keen observation about a 'haunting' feeling couldn't (and wouldn't) have been made without this poetical approach. Thanks for sharing.
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