Sunshine.

By Silent Laughter

Sat, 08 Nov 2014
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Do whatever you wish,
Sunshine.
Do as you please,
Sunshine.
Do what you choose,
Sunshine.
 
I wish the drops were to fall
on my lashes.
 
Blur the world from sight
and thought. 
 
Let my mind wander in the
passions of the heart.
 
 
I wish the drops were to fall
on my tongue.
 
Erase the pain from touch
and soul.
 
Allow my emotions to drift in the
zeal of my mind.
 
 
I wish the drops were to fall
on my skin.
 
Lessen the fever from taste
and freedom.
 
Support my choice of giving life
or creating death.
 
Do whatever you wish,
Sunshine.
Do as you please,
Sunshine.
Do what you choose,
Sunshine.
Certificate PG
Poem
Self-Worth.
Spiritual
Romance
Unclassified
Philosophy
Nature

Comments

Submitted by Silver Spun Sand on

'Support my choice of giving life or creating death'.  Key words, in this emotive piece, SL.

Liked.

Tina

 

Submitted by Stephen Thom on

^ agree with the above...i don't know anything about poetry but it looks to me to be very effective this style...the repeated mantra beginning and end...fragmented images and wishes and thoughts and then this key line that gives it something else, takes it to another place...enjoyed