Chasing Stars
By Silver Spun Sand
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Brass monkey weather – high
on Dunstable Downs, spotting
shooting stars. From a thermos
in his car, we drank hot chocolate...
then he made fun of my ‘moustache’;
the spitting image of Hitler’s.
The grass – damp with evening rain
as we sat...writing with our fingers
love-poems on each other’s backs
like a lazy southern drawl...spoken
with the body’s slang and the rhyme,
reason and rhythm of the heart.
A perfect night – we scoured the skies
as the clouds, finally, broke;
he taught me all the constellations –
turned out he was a Sagittarian, and me
a Leo...a match made in heaven.
“On the horizon is the Plough,”
he said. “Overhead, it’s Orion,
the hunter; that line of three stars
is his belt, and watch Sirius flash
orange, red and green!”
No shooting stars for us, but what
did we care? We made it to the moon
at least, in his 1966, home-sprayed
cream and pink, Zephyr Zodiac
but we stopped chasing stars
a long time since and yet, we’re still
in love, of sorts – I guess. Things change
though, like ‘the where’, and ‘the when’.
And ‘the why’... most of all.
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You have covered the IP here
You have covered the IP here without realising! Tender, such a special scene created. Made me want to be the one with the moustache.
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Such a lovely love poem with
Such a lovely love poem with added starness.
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A very endearing and scenic
A very endearing and scenic picture you paint here nice one!
Mark Heathcote
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Very much enjoyed reading
Very much enjoyed reading Tina, you gave this poem that Silver Spun Sand magic touch.
Jenny.
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