The Hours

By Silver Spun Sand
Thu, 21 Feb 2013
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14 comments
At the window
watching the sun
slope home...way
before curfew...
filigree patterns
spill across my hands
and onto the sill
hearing seconds
pass –
each sweep
of the pendulum
hours stacked, back
to back, as slack
as deckchairs
on a winter’s beach
I want to reach out – grab
with both hands
childhood’s afternoon...
playing gob-stones
beside the kerb –
daredevil rides
down Nightingale Hill;
the swerving,
the breaking
the spill
the bloodied nose
when friends said,
‘Blimey – mate
you got some nerve...
you nearly died!
‘What was it like?’
That look lit their eyes
said it all, and you were ‘it’
for the day, in the days
when everything went by
but time.
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ah, the bulletproof days of
ah, the bulletproof days of youth...."in the days when everything went by but time"...that was brilliant :) - alvin
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i still take those daredevil
i still take those daredevil rides, it just takes longer to get back on again. Lovely poetry as ever Tina.
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You've written about longed
Permalink Submitted by skinner_jennifer on
You've written about longed for childhood memories
so well in this poem, that last stanza said it all
for me.
Remembering those endless summer holidays, when days
were long and we never really thought about time,
just thought about having fun.
And danger wasn't a word that existed.
Stirring poem Tina and much enjoyed.
Jenny.
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playing gob-stones beside
Permalink Submitted by littleditty on
playing gob-stones
beside the kerb –
daredevil rides
down Nightingale Hill;
the swerving,
the breaking
the spill
the bloodied nose - nice rhymes here, childhood times
chiming and rhyming, nostalgia is so good at noticing time passing, you too here, i like the idea of wanting to grab those good memories so much i might find one! Good to read Tina xxx
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Hi Tina, I think this is
Hi Tina, I think this is great. One again you evoke memories of childhood and tinge it with a kind of sadness of days (hours, minutes, seconds) gone by. Time we cannot get back, you do that so well. Loved this bit:
hours stacked, back
to back, as slack
as deckchairs
on a winter’s beach
Should really have been cherried.
Trev
TVR
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I really enjoyed this Tina.
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I really enjoyed this Tina. Wonderful imagery - especially the second stanza
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