The Leaving

By Silver Spun Sand
Tue, 04 Nov 2008
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Caught up in a whirlwind
of buying duvets and curtains,
mugs, plates and bowls,
electric kettles and toasters.
So much so, I’d not considered
what it would be like – the leaving.
It didn’t seem five minutes ago,
I’d been buying highchairs
and baby-grows.
The rain was coming down
in stair-rods as they drove off
that morning in a clapped out
Morris Minor. The car packed
to the gills with duffle-bags
and hold-alls – my daughter
and her friend.
Waving goodbye, just in sight,
through the leaves of a potted
avocado plant, lovingly grown
from seed which she couldn’t
leave behind, was her hand,
so fragile, as they hit
the open road.
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Another winner Tina, this is
Another winner Tina, this is really gentle in its composition yet it still manages to pierce the heart. Lovely. Val x
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The last stanza was just
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The last stanza was just perfect. You made a simple sentiment very heartfelt. Beautiful :)
Magic xxx
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