Madame Butterfly

By Silver Spun Sand
Mon, 28 Dec 2009
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“Like the tattoo,” I say,
as we lay there...after.
Nice touch – the butterfly
perched on the letter ‘M’.
At least you won’t forget
who you are,” I add,
lighting up – post-shag style.
She doesn’t answer –
not straight away.
“Yours truly designed it.
Used to fancy myself
as an artist, would you believe?
Well – what’s a girl like me got
if not her dreams?
Actually saw the opera once...
in another life. Anyway,
the name kind of stuck.
You know how it is.
Never even knew
what I was really called –
or who spawned me.
In my line of trade,
permanency don’t exist.
With lodgings as they are –
just one suitcase allowed,
at least it stops the rain
mispronouncing my name...”
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feels like watching a film
feels like watching a film in black and white,(or maybe french) I don't know why! excellent and original,:-}
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I like 'dialogue poems'and
I like 'dialogue poems'and this is a good one, worth the reading for 'at least it stops the rain mispronouncing my name'. This does indeed create (a sepia-toned?) picture.
Permanency? My dictionary has this as archaic except for the secondary meaning of 'something permanent' rather than the state of being permanent.
Regards
Ewan
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I really enjoyed, another
I really enjoyed, another brilliant poem. Very atmospheric. Not much I can say that hasn't already been said (-;
Beeme xx
k.
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'at least it stops the
Permalink Submitted by MistakenMagic on
'at least it stops the rain
mispronouncing my name...'
- love the final two lines Tina! And this is a superb dialogue poem - you really get a feel for both speakers!
Magic xxx
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