For Sale - Sold as Seen
By Silver Spun Sand
Fri, 06 Feb 2015
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The yard full of clutter – an old sink,
a has-been lavatory cistern, to ‘come in handy
one of these days’. An oil can, various lids
from aerosols of gold paint in a cacophony
of varying variations of a theme...
another one of Dad’s crazy schemes –
drove Mum to an early grave. Cherubs –
once graced the Sistine Chapel...his spiel;
in reality, plaster-of-Paris lookalikes –
fashioned in his workshop – yesterday.
The down-pipe’s leaking, again, the gate
still squeaks...the willow’s been denuded...
pollarded – cut off...axed in its prime...bare,
stark, primeval, like some prehistoric monster
making a V sign at a bruised, February sky...
Upstairs, in the loo – still the same
Hint of Pine Air-Wick, and a toilet roll needs
replacing. My dad’s room – a stark
reminder of how booze ruins lives; Mum
gazes disapprovingly down from the wall –
a glad to be rid of him look in her eyes.
In ‘our’ room, pleated school skirts –
still in Sketchley Cleaner’s bags...
three sizes ago, a hockey stick, still bearing
the scars of the KLG playing fields...
now a housing estate, north of Kingston.
Through the window – Dad’s shirt,
blowing on the line; a no-hope angel
desperate to take flight. The swing-seat –
motionless – despite the breeze, still
mourning the fact, that, never again
will it get to hold her;
plump the pillow on my late sister’s bed...
old habits die hard; a plume of dust, settles,
the residue offers itself to the ether, like a cloud,
like a blessing, and I, myself, ache to be held
by arms, no longer there.
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That house is very telling.
That house is very telling. You can tell a whole history through 'things' and done with your usual finesse
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The material remains of lives
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The material remains of lives lived, poignant.
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Hi Tina,
Permalink Submitted by skinner_jennifer on
Hi Tina,
if walls could talk, what stories they could tell. It was as if those walls were talking through your words. Observing the accounts, I even got a picture in my head of each reflection. Very well put.
Jenny.
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Hi Tina
Hi Tina
I really loved the way you did this - told so much of the history of a family by remembering bits from the house and garden.
Jean
Jean Day
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