Southville Hop (I.P.)

By Silver Spun Sand

Mon, 03 Mar 2014
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13 comments
 
Nissed as a pewt, that’s our Jock;
ale was the culprit, full-stop!
Whilst drunk – broke his leg
but the break failed to mend
now his gait is a real
Southville Hop.
Certificate 15
Poem
Humour
Inspiration Point (work that responds to our weekly writing cue)

Comments

Submitted by Linda Wigzell Cress on

Just the laugh I need today Tina!  Great take on the IP.

Linda

Submitted by Silver Spun Sand on

Thanks, Linda...thinking up this one was a pleasant distraction from the vacuuming I was doing at the timesmiley

Tina

 

Submitted by luigi_pagano on

Nipped as a pewt, eh? Short and funny.

Luigi xxx

 

Submitted by Silver Spun Sand on

Thanks, Luigi.  Pleased you likedsmiley  Actually that beer sounds kind of nice.  Fruity overtones, so I understand.  Must give it a whirl some of these nightswink.

Tina xxx

 

Submitted by prettyrose on

smileyHi Tina, Brilliantly told and made me laugh, which is always a winner for meyes.

 

Good Luck with IP !!!!smiley

 

Take Care

 

Trish x

smiley Keep Smiling

Keep Writing xxx

Submitted by prettyrose on

smileyHi Tina, Brilliantly told and made me laugh, which is always a winner for meyes. Love the pic to, making me thirsty though,and reminds me of a festival I went to long ago lol.

 

Good Luck with IP !!!!smiley

 

Take Care

 

Trish x

smiley Keep Smiling

Keep Writing xxx

Submitted by Silver Spun Sand on

Trish...cheers!!!!!!!!!!!!smiley

Tina xxx

 

Submitted by Denzella on

I pissitively possed myself with

'Nissed as a pewt'

Moya

 

Submitted by Silver Spun Sand on

Oh, dear, Moya...oh dearsmiley

Tina

 

Submitted by hudsonmoon on

Big laugh this morning, Tina. Thanks for that.

Rich

 

Submitted by Silver Spun Sand on

You're more than welcome, Richsmiley

Tina

 

Submitted by skinner_jennifer on

Very funny Tina...like your sense of humour!  laugh  yes

Jenny.

 

Submitted by Silver Spun Sand on

Thanks, Jennysmiley

Tina