Unrequited

great rhtymn. great use of language, great imagery, I really like this Tina. David xx :--)

Hi Tina, three things: 1. You're very welcome 2. You certainly won one as far as I'm concerned. 3. If other half was impressed by everything you wrote, you might begin to doubt his sincerity. 4. I know I said 3 things, but what the hey. David xx :--)

new Silver-spun-sand Really enjoyed this cleverly put is that the word. Stanza I like is All of it. Starts Outisde the porch a solar lamp flickered-etc; A ghost moth,beautiful. Lovely sun-shine!so if he can't get there! I'll be thinking of you, as with your beautiful poem "Myth of Narcissus".Depends how many there,I'm honoured to do for you. and maybe another,one or two,I'll have to breathe slowly! and practice!words to be calm.xJust pray. Mine is exactly the same. Only interested number one!We are both in the wars his back,ugh! and me bruising.He will see me on train. Sometimes Have a good week-end. Tnankyouoo! xx julie

I really enjoyed this, superb language and very beautiful images. Loved the last lines, just perfect Tina. Beeme xx

I like it , Tina x A brief glimpse of an emotional moment x so well written x:)

new Silver-spun-sand Sorry you had bad storm.Yes,you must have prayed I don't find time to go now.All went very well! Mine did come on the train,and stayed through,walked now and again.It wasn't where I thought. About 15 Poets that area! read first or alternate,we had orange cards,never stood up. I said Abctales and Editor T.Cook Abctales. And I was honoured to read yes" your "Myth Of Narcissus" not mine poet of Abctales, Bit jittery,they all clap each one,liked very much,I didn't know till after poet!he was journalist and Editor amongst other things.He read a few.I think I was allowed to do three or did,"Green Eyes" he could see my copies in my hand,so I read your beautiful "Myth Of Narcissus." honoured to,1st.One Then said read "Oh! The Wheelie Bin"later he did so did. But did ask for your namo hope done right! Maybe he saw "Silver-spun-sand" after top of page.I and we introduced to each.Kind of, I mentioned any one can join.Some exchanged name and contact number one elderly she liked "Green Eyes" as daughter had a cat,so gave her a copy. What shall I do with yours keep it in my file,I hope I've said everthing right on here! books on table no not free,fruit juice and water £5 but on way back lunch,I found £5.One read one on a chicken comedy good.One similar to you very good.Mixture. So back we went,and maybe get an email get poets book.Any questions please ask.I wouldn't be surpised if he joins Abctales.I got his name when we went back!Lunch shopped and train 6 stations home.Good day.All round.Do please say I did all ok.I sincerely hope.We were going to do comment end,but didn't.It was an hour good,and half hour chat. julie xx Thankyou so much.Will delete if to long.Please say.

new Silver-spun-sand Sorry you had bad storm.Yes,you must have prayed I don't find time to go now.All went very well! Mine did come on the train,and stayed through,walked now and again.It wasn't where I thought. About 15 Poets that area! read first or alternate,we had orange cards,never only one stood up. I said Abctales and Editor T.Cook Abctales. And I was honoured to read yes" your "Myth Of Narcissus" not mine but your good poet of Abctales,said alright. Bit jittery,they all clap each one,liked very much,I didn't know till after poet! he was journalist and Editor amongst other things.?? He read a few.I don't know where came from but read his from a book. I was allowed to do three or did,I said title of three some said "Green Eyes" he could see my copies in my hand,so I read your beautiful ist I read "Myth Of Narcissus." honoured to,1st.One.Then said read "Oh! The Wheelie Bin"later he did so did.Because I read out titles in my hand,as sat near me. But did ask for your name after read it. hope done right! Maybe he saw "Silver-spun-sand" after top of page,I had copy I do with all my heart hope did right. and we introduced to each.Kind of,where came from and how heard of it.Worthing.Some sai on Radio. Mine said so many last year had to change room this time. Battery going flat so didn't catch all said. I mentioned any one can join.Abctales.com.Some exchanged name and contact number one elderly she liked "Green Eyes" as daughter had a cat,so gave her a copy. What shall I do with yours keep it in my file,I hope I've said everthing right on here! books on table no not free,fruit juice and water. chocolate egg.Book was £5 I hidden in my things,and bit more incase he gone. but on way back lunch,I found £5.One read one on a chicken comedy good.Accept the Lord's name in vane used?Couple times. One bit similar to you very good. No where as well thought and done as your images and intricate words.. Mixture. So back we went,and maybe get an email get poets book.Library find out me. any questions please ask.I wouldn't be surpised if he joins Abctales.I got his name when we went back!We had Lunch shopped and train 6 stations home.Good day.All round.Do please say I did all ok.I sincerely hope.We were going to do comment end,but didn't.It was an hour good,and half hour chat.and his and other's readings.Variety. Thankyou so much.I will delete anything to long.Please say. julie xx

new Silver-spun-sand Hi! no no lady,phew!that hard to put,or explain. After name I just looked up on search My goodness me!!! So talented I see.is there? Any questions I'll try explain.I couldn't get your's and someone else's email on computer to work send replie. But Where both tired,resting.Did you know Advert "Felix" doing comp;in large packs;looked all,but nearly £4 pack?heavy,no cat so entered daughter's 3.So confusing,ages and years,left blank To carry from Worthing. Take care god bless Will delete if to long say so.please.Just get carried away! but our Editor Abctales Tony is there o help all and does? But your poetry I can watch and pick up bits and pieces and help me.Creative words make me use the dictionary,good.thanks. julie xx

Simply beautiful, Tina! I love the structure with the two-stanza split - I can't decided which is my favourite, all the images just flow together so seamlessly! Seriously well done on this one ;) Magic xxx

New Silver-spun-sand Sorry seems posted 2 similar. Which do I cancell or both.Just say. julie xx

really like this one as is - thought also ok without feisty bullshit-red line for a more subtle disappointment. Oh dear,'darkness came prematurely'- clear reflection/littlepic Tina :) A Ghosty Moth, and the butterfly still behind the glass - good storypoem, enjoyed :) xx

neqw Silver-spun-lost my comment letter to you. No I am not,but I know there is a god who heals 16 yeras pain. But Jesus said I have forgiven you so you must forgive others? Yes,it was brilliant I started when asked Spring wonderful one of yours "Myth Of The Narcissus" he said we could clap to all,yours was the loudest really.Night-time cafe set up that counts me out not night-time. I never got an opology but phones stopped good. Only call centre say singing cancelled I wrote! Do you have ballett shoes,and photos.and musical too your clever and poet. I have watched Sir Andrew Lloyd Webber choosing "Dorothy" for "The Wizard of oz". They are just someone singing "Memories". Wish I had done better,but I wrote and email couple photos,wow better than mine,taken.No! Wheelie Bin was one off thing,causing stir on here!I watched tv programme on Crocodile so interesting,so tried poem,hit wrong key went under story,Kheldar's commented as asked all ideas and comments any one can do one.If you get time I would love your comments and advise cos;added to it.Car pulls up yesterday mine saw I was backroom, he said two little girl's got out,liftr tin paint,NO! dropped it and bit went on our little wall re-built, and he gone out, as fingers wiped on wall,emulsion and in road.He doen's stand up me in good or bad!so surprised apparently live up road,he was so nice,came in hose washed it all down and his neighbour helped too.Then it pours hard,washed it off.Most groups let a lone age,will not let you do anything if have set groups,so thrilled thanks. I picked up what done got off bus.It's come in now I did say quickly prayer,hope it's come out 3rd time been on the bus,altering shop around couldn't find when did I squealed instead picture kind of lady face can't say brand shop,permission it was amazing. I got permission,coloured in eye shadows and got pens,bit heavier if you get me?it is great.Not small as said all over I squealed and hugged her. I love "Say You LOVE me" is it from "phantom Of The Of The Opera" I Love "Madame Butterfly" Well have a good week-end.Pictures on tv to "Elvis" look alike singing.and photos of Raphalites,like my book as a background."Wheelie Bin" still missing. Need all help on "Crocodile Tears".True. Well I was a crock-crocodile once!in everything.Cold,lifeless. Sorry long letter.Spelling mistakes. julie x

Gorgeous. I have little tolerance for poetry, but this is more than tolerable. I like it because unlike most poetry, it is not flouncy and doesn't beat around the bush. It's understandable yet makes you think. It's not one of the indecipherable pieces of garbage they put in high school text books. So basically... I like it.