EBOLOWA 43

By simonmiller15

Mon, 06 Jun 2016

3 comments

A much revised version of EBOLOWA will be on sale in book shops and online at Unbound.com.

Details to follow as and when.

many thanks meantime to readers at ABC

and good luck.

simon

Certificate 18

Permalink Submitted by airyfairy on Tue, 2016-06-07 08:26

Really glad to see another chapter! Tense as always, and a great cliffhanger.

Permalink Submitted by simonmiller15 on Tue, 2016-06-07 08:33

thanks AF - - good to be back and get your enthusiasm, especially over the clifhanger.

Permalink Submitted by Sandy Hogarth on Wed, 2016-08-03 14:21

The 'he managed --- look downhaerted and miserable.' Don't understand the 'managed' in this context. And you use 'misunderstood 10 or so lines later.

Then says'I've never got over her.' Am a bit lost.

'momentarily broken' seems overdoing it.

Otherwise like it.