MY HANDSOME STRANGER OF THE NIGHT
By skinner_jennifer
Mon, 28 Feb 2011
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Slow loves call in the night,
for in dreams I see him,
when first he entered my room,
a lover's soft embrace,
but then when dreams broke,
I wake with a sad feeling,
needing that warmth
of his gentle touch,
I yearn for slumber,
reality drags me down,
but never did I see you again,
my handsome stranger of the night.
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a melancholy poem Jenny- you
a melancholy poem Jenny- you may want to change "broken" for broke- a fine atmospheric piece.
;)Pia
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hello Jenny - I agree with
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hello Jenny - I agree with Shoe - the first stanza is really good. One typo - line 5 "a lovers embrace" - should be lover's
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Very much enjoyed Jenny -
Very much enjoyed Jenny - you really pull your readers in with your first stanzas. :-)
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