No Time for Space
By smokejack
Thu, 29 Sep 2011
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No Time for Space
Swept the sky with a witches broom
And polished the black marbled clouds
I fell asleep on a marshmallow moon
All wrapped up in stardust shroud
Life is so much better here
Away from caustic breath
I need to see what I’ve never seen
A world with something left
And when I’m sailing on a star
Floating on misguided hope
You know that things get smaller
When you look through a telescope
The world is still in motion
Exposed to the wrath of violence
We’re an explosive kind of potion
Between the protest and the silence
And when the smoke is clearing
And the coughs are running dry
We’ll find out who was steering
And perhaps we can ask them why
©JMcN
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I enjoyed reading this, so
Permalink Submitted by maggyvaneijk on
I enjoyed reading this, so many magical images that make me want to float up into that marshmallow moon away from polluted London.
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Hi smokejack, what a
Permalink Submitted by skinner_jennifer on
Hi smokejack,
what a brilliant piece of writing, I too loved all
the descriptive bits in this.
Very cleverly put together and definitely worth
those cherries.
Jenny.
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Fabulous. I really enjoyed
Permalink Submitted by christajoyce on
Fabulous. I really enjoyed the read. Thank you!
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I loved it. Fantasy imagry
Permalink Submitted by L G Meadows on
I loved it. Fantasy imagry with a tell it like it is tone.
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