Undressing
By stevepoet
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Back home, as I undress,
I breathe in and am lost
to your perfume, unmistakable
on my T-shirt. Visceral, I feel
your presence, pulling me back to my
centre with a drunken gravity.
A star, sunrise, a rainbow, a black cat,
three bounces of an imaginary acrobat
between cars. None of these superstitions
holds. Your scent diffuses into mine
where your head lay on my chest last night.
I still feel you there, pressing lightly
above my heart, its own muffled tattoo
insistent as I made my arms strong around you.
Your right arm was across me, here.
I kissed your bright hair.
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Beautiful! All the painterly
Beautiful! All the painterly touches so perfectly placed. Thank you for posting this Steve
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It's not quite
It's not quite appropriate but I think of, 'take the ribbon from your hair, shake it loose and let it fall' but now the same, back home again. Your poem? I would say you have a gift, you're a rough diamond. I do it for the fun too!
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