On Looking Back
By sunshine
Wed, 19 Aug 2009
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Would I turn back the clock with it’s
tick tock tease and the dull weight
of squandered days and opportunity?
Was the fascination of our youth
truly lost in wasted tears and
bewilderment of our desires?
And were those later, stolen nights
mere impostors playing with our hearts
and to our ragged, fading dreams?
Now, your warm voice has grown familiar
while our conversation drifts, and you
talk of weary limbs and journey’s end.
But I recall a sweet conspiracy
that once was based on passion.
Have we abandoned all love’s pleasures
or have they capriciously abandoned us?
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I really enjoyed this
I really enjoyed this Sunshine. The last lines of the poem are perfect :-)
I especially liked these lines;
'And were those later, stolen days
mere impostors playing with our hearts
and to our ragged, fading dreams?'
Beeme xx
k.
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I also really enjoyed this,
I also really enjoyed this, you managed to fit in an awful lot of food for though into just two stanzas! It was both a philosophical and intriguing read.
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"But I recall a sweet
Permalink Submitted by Silver Spun Sand on
"But I recall a sweet conspiracy
that once was based on passion."
How much I identify with these words, Margot.
A gem - as always.
Tina
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new Sunshine Beautifully
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new Sunshine
Beautifully done!
sometimes when look back
can be good or bad.
so if clock stops!
can be someone's
died sometimes!
It has to be re- wound
or time stands still.
julie x cavalcader
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new sunshine well done on
Permalink Submitted by Cavalcader on
new sunshine
well done on cherry.
liked all of it.
sometimes it seems forgive
if wrong but more comments
good or bad then one gets
a cherry good.
julie xx (:- maybe I am to
observant?
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