somethings

By swindonwoody

Tue, 04 Jan 2011
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somethings are better somethings are sad
somethings can make you really mad
i try the best i can but i getting wore out
somethings you can scream about too much

somethings you cant change no matter how you wish there always stay the same. oh sometimes life is a game. but i know if i look into my soul
i see who am really am i want to scream but something thing are never ment to show

sometimes i wake in the middle of the night and wish that i could take fights and reach out my wings across this wide world and take hold of life and and shake it up a bit ... something can you make you feel sad...

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Comments

Submitted by Silver Spun Sand on
Swindon...in this poem, you succeed, very well, in transmitting to the reader a real sense of frustration. I think we all feel, sometimes, we'd like to 'take hold of life and shake it up a bit'... I know I do, often;-) Tina

 

Submitted by swindonwoody on
Thank you Tina for you kind words. yes we all do need to scream now and again. How can we be free if i our hearts cant sing. or we cant kick the wall of life now again. ty maggie

maggie