What is love
By swindonwoody
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what is love can you say
it is a spring day
what is love it a beautiful blue sky above
with never-ending sunshine
what is love it is a child's giggle
and all their smile
what is love it having a hugs
what is love longing for someone to come back
what is love a million things
what is love when you look into someone else eyes
what is love its shares a heart
what is love so many things
you can count them on your fingers
what is love you can't see it or touch it or move it
what is love its the feeling inside like a thousand butterfly
all spinning round inside
what is love no one can make it or sell it
what is love who can tell that takes people
to dizzy heights
what is love its kissing good night
what is love you can bottle it
what is love if someone knew how to make it up
there be a wealthy man or women
what is love when it hits
you don't know how or when it will happen to you
what is love it's a warm feeling inside
what is love a million books have been written about it
what is love it's simple this you are in love
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There are some good lines and
There are some good lines and well paced thoughts but if I may suggest, take out the 'What is love' from each line, use it at the start to begin the poem and perhaps again in the concluding line but within the poem use only the thoughts or questions on what love is; and I do agree with your conclusuion:: love is...love.
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