"exhalt in beauty" -tanka

Cherry

By T. Imaan Tretchicovmanicova

Wed, 05 Jun 2024
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a tranquil rose's
doe like petals whisper her
sole purpose is in
bloom and exhalt in beauty
nature's most splendid ballet.

© t. imaan tretchicovmanicova
03 june 2024

Certificate U
Poem
1st noble castle
Spiritual

Comments

Submitted by skinner_jennifer on

Enchanting poem,

Jenny.

 

Submitted by Tom Brown on

Stunning, a rose to take your breath away, a breath taking rose. I have seen one believe me. Just one. And I mean a real rose, one that wilts in a day and I don't know where it came from. Sorry so mysterious!

Keep well! Tom

 

Submitted by Nolan on

As the rose that takes no care

Will open out on sunny air

Bloom after bloom, fair after fair,

Sweet after sweet,

Just so did she,

As carelessly.

- Rafferty

 

Submitted by T. Imaan Tretch... on

Lovely Peggy thank you for sharing your writing with the ABCtales community.

Submitted by memphis on

And as she blooms her aroma does linger in moments of mysterium.

William E Alexander

Submitted by T. Imaan Tretch... on

Thank you.

Submitted by T. Imaan Tretch... on

Thank you ABCtales.com for the 2 beautiful cherries; I am honoured.