Write a Love Song
By TedShirt
Sat, 13 Feb 2010
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Write a love song they suggested.
But where will I find words
Adequate to describe?
When it's been said so often,
An easy-come cliche.
Every combination explored
Yet the safe remains locked.
My mind: blocked.
Emotion speaks a different language.
Sensations speak louder than words
In tongues,
Entwined.
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No cliches here, I like the
No cliches here, I like the last verse especially, has a sensual quality.
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new TedShirt hello. This is
Permalink Submitted by Cavalcader on
new TedShirt
hello. This is good,
put word's,down so many
cards,and pictures now.
Just let it flow from the heart!
Dictionary may help,word love etc:
and if it is for someone you know,
build it around that,or what they do or mean
to you.Have I said it right.
julie .
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