Galactic Glimpses
By loquaciousicity
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Galactic curls in spirals swirl, entwining twisted mystery,
where time unrolls in blackened holes, no longer bright and blistery,
but writ like runes on starry dunes enclosed in cosmic history
Galactic dust, from novas' gusts, congesting empty spaces
once fatefully flung beyond the tongue of burnt out astral traces,
may recompress and coalesce in distant times and places
Galactic dwarves, like ancient wharves with silent planets mooring
yet still in spin though long done in, hide flares no longer soaring -
magnetic webs of eons ebb, in thermal fusion roaring
Galactic tides warp space divides, call forth sublime creation
while bending clocks in rippled shocks, unfolding time dilation
that seems to crown the flowing gown of pulsars' pulsed gyration
Galactic stew, a seething brew, midst background noise and chatter
like Chaos reigns, the sole remains of missing antimatter,
with just a trace to form a space-time, curved or somewhat flatter
Galactic glue holds something new: dark energy and matter
that interacts and counteracts the ancient Big Bang splatter:
a cosmic soup of strings and loops, a universal batter
Galactic life's replete and rife 'neath lactic milky wafer,
though solar gales leave unseen trails of cosmic rays, the strafer;
but nonetheless, one must confess, it seems there's nowhere safer
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I love the rhythm of this
I love the rhythm of this poem and as a lover of all things cosmic I loved it even more. Your work inspires me anew.
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Hi, haven't seen you around
Hi, haven't seen you around awhile, Terry! I've read this a couple of times and love some of the clever nuances packed in, and the rhythm and rhyme. Can't get my head around everything. Loved the last line especially which I presume refers to the amazing suitability of the earth, despite the problems that have for now entered creation.
The line about the 'Big Bang splatter' was intriguing as 'splatter' is really what we'd expect if it was an undirected explosion. The Bible says not only was it made from nothing, but that God moved everything out into place with all its unfathomable complexity, order and stability.
Rhiannon
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Dark matter etc
It is a good poem, the subject matter is quite unusual. Very imaginative. The picture evolves like a movie hey?
A "darkened hole" to me sounds more feasible than a "blackened hole" and in turn, a "black hole". A matter of taste I guess. As for your conclusion, luckily things happen very slowly, well for us then, apparently!
Cheers Terry! &
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