Love Without Hope

By loquaciousicity

Wed, 30 Mar 2016
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Above, the blushing blood moon vexes silken ebon space

with shadows in the mournful mist recalling, pale, a wistful trace -

her farewell smile I viewed through tears that almost veiled her face -

she turned away and whispered low 'another time, another place...'

 

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Submitted by Rhiannonw on

There is so much in each line you write, Terry, that it is good sometimes to have a short work, and take in detail.
This little piece suggests and conjures up for the readers a sad and poignant parting. I especially liked the third line.
Rhiannon

 

Submitted by loquaciousicity on

Thank you, Rhiannon!

Yes... often short is better...

And yes, 'a sad and poignant parting'..

Thanks fo the comments!

Terry

Submitted by EB on

So much possible meaning in her last words. I liked the clear images presented in this piece.

Submitted by EB on

So much possible meaning in her last words. I liked the clear images presented in this piece.

Submitted by EB on

So much possible meaning in her last words. I liked the clear images presented in this piece.

Submitted by loquaciousicity on

Thank you EB!  smiley

Yep... there is often so much possble meaning...

I'm happy you liked!!!