Remember

By loquaciousicity

Thu, 10 Sep 2015
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Remember that embers
                  that fade in November

May blaze through the days [daze] that
                  dismember[s] December.

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Submitted by Rhiannonw on

How intriguing, Terry! There seems such a lot that can be unpacked from that: the fading things that come to life again, the relivening of the daze dismembering December (January sometimes seems a daze to people after the excitement of the end of December!). You certainly have a mind that enjoys playing with complex alliteration and rhymes. Rhiannon

 

Submitted by loquaciousicity on

Thank you Rhiannon... much appreciated!

Submitted by VeraClark on

Really like this, Terry. Ambiguity gives it more power.

 

Submitted by loquaciousicity on

Thank you, Vera...

Ambiguity can make a mountain out of a molehill... smiley

Submitted by EB on

Kept me thinking.

Submitted by loquaciousicity on

Thinking is great!

Glad I could be of help...smiley