The Old House
By threeleafshamrock
Fri, 19 Aug 2011
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Cracked and stained, of life and death
and something in between…
Of ghosts that flit, with teasing breath;
that seemed as ever-green.
Eyes; unsheltered, shattered lens,
proclaim a soul laid bare…
And yet a gateway to old friends,
insist the harking share.
Liberty and sadness vie
for dominance in mind…
And oils of long forgotten sighs,
can seem a sight unkind.
Far better, not to look upon
this mangled heart turned stone…
but now, alas, the deed is done,
and I am more alone.
Thus turned away, with misty view,
I seek once more the road…
And leave for all, the youth I knew;
a broken down abode!
Chris Birrane © 2011
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A fantastic poem about the
Permalink Submitted by maggyvaneijk on
A fantastic poem about the past, I also liked what you wrote in the preview, about memory and distortion.
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Very reminiscent of Robert
Permalink Submitted by MistakenMagic on
Very reminiscent of Robert Frost, Chris. Truly haunting. Well done!
Magic xxx
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A lovely poem, lie John
Permalink Submitted by Richard L. Prov... on
A lovely poem, lie John Masefield. Great descriptions. Richard LP
Richard L. Provencher
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Wonderful. The words and
Permalink Submitted by AlexPickett on
Wonderful. The words and emotions flow brilliantly.
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