Purity Lost
By threeleafshamrock
Sun, 20 Mar 2011
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When young, how love too, was young.
Fresh, suckling; innocent,
dependant and unquestioning.
Honest wants, needs, desires,
were played to be won,
painless victory assured.
Where was swaddled purity lost?
When did cheating choices,
choose to spoil or complicate?
Was it pugilistic puberty,
brought awareness to
wear and fray, with bravado?
Could it be adolescent
angst, that sulking, sullenly
declared its strength a weakness?
Or would yet adult err, with mature
madness, mangle servitude,
promoting serf to master of all?
Who e’re the villain be, I wish
bestowed, the harshest punishment,
for the death, he hath caused!
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There are some great stanzas
There are some great stanzas in this piece, Chris but my favourite is the first - suckling indeed!
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You are quite right about
You are quite right about dissecting love and it being ruined that way. What a brilliant piece of poetry here Chris. Such a fabulous way of expressing yourself. The innocent and the damned !!!
;)Pia
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