gray delusion

By tibi popovici

Wed, 03 Jun 2015
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4 comments
 

five dirty fingers
and a white canvas

an horizon line
and a piece of charcoal

one bright eye
over a gray lane of dust

short clumsiness
and a trembling brush

deep breath
and hope has come

no time to waste
the flood is there

rivers of gray
continuously overlay

grains of dust
trapped inside the paint

scratchy noise
interfering with the color

unexpected joy
and a full hand gray

a new hue was made
of a color named red.

 

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Comments

Submitted by Art of the Diver on

Interesting perspective and finale I like the 5 dirty fingers and a white canvas, that is a powerful image.

Thanks for sharing, I'll go read some more of your work.. take care  yes

Rob

Submitted by tibi popovici on

Thanks a lot for reading Rob, any fresh oppinion matters to me.

These days I have less time for reading and write here, but I will do my best to keep up.

T.

Submitted by EB on

Describes well a turning around from delusion using colour. The words flow like paint.

Submitted by tibi popovici on

Thanks EB, did my best to let the canvas to be free smiley

T.