Things I Don't Like.

By Maxine Jasmin-Green

Mon, 14 Jan 2013
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I don't like Marmite.

I don't like peanut butter.

I don't like Winter.

I don't like queue pushers.

I don't like olives.

I don't like bullies.

I don't like shoplifters.

I don't like pretend street 'beggars.'

I don't like people who sell fakes.

I don't like avocado.

I don't like losing.

I don't like vomit.

I don't like spiders.

There are a lot more things I don't like, but if I add them, I would have to list this as an 18 certificate.

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Comments

Submitted by Bee on
What I like about this is that nothing seems to relate to the next thing, if that makes sense - except maybe, - marmite and peanut butter, which are both spreads. At first I saw this - not so much a poem, as a list of things you don't like, but then I noticed that instead of end rhymes, the first three words of every line rhyme perfectly in a fitting repetition, which is great! Enjoyed, Bee
Bee

Submitted by Maxine Jasmin-Green on
Thank you Bee, for your lovely comments.

 

Submitted by Bee on
What I like about this is that nothing seems to relate to the next thing, if that makes sense - except maybe, - marmite and peanut butter, which are both spreads. At first I saw this - not so much a poem, as a list of things you don't like, but then I noticed that instead of end rhymes, the first three words of every line rhyme perfectly in a fitting repetition, which is great! Enjoyed, Bee
Bee

Submitted by The Walrus on
I like eating a Marmite and peanut butter sandwich in the winter while I'm pushing into a queue to buy olives and bullying shoplifters who pretend to beg as they sell fake Adidas trainers on street corners whilset munching on avocadoes, slowly losing the plot and vomiting onto tiny passing spiders.....

Submitted by Maxine Jasmin-Green on
Walrus, that was SO funny!