Dreams
By Toabs
Tue, 03 Jun 2008
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You only live twice,
Or so it seems.
One for your life,
One for your dreams.
A dream that looms,
A dream that waits.
A dream that came,
A dream too late.
It makes no sense,
It makes no means.
A world of weird,
A word of dreams.
A dream of love,
A dream of hate.
A dream that came,
A dream too late.
Sleep torn apart,
At the seams.
A world of pain,
A world of dreams.
The dream has passed,
Wiped from the slate.
A dream that came,
A dream too late.
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'You only live twice, Or so
'You only live twice,
Or so it seems.
One for your life,
One for your dreams.'
is perfect in itself.
p.s. I think you mean 'too late', unless I am misreading this entirely?
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Lucky - I can never remember
Lucky - I can never remember my dreams, although that may well be a good thing! Spelling witch strikes again!
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wow i totally understand,
wow i totally understand, this is a pretty cool poem
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Congratulations on your
Congratulations on your poems. Very well done....I look forward to your next one.....remind me to have have a word with about your spelling!
Grandma via delbois.
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toby darlng yur amazing,
Permalink Submitted by Tobysbiggestfan on
toby darlng yur amazing, seriously
dont give up on yur DREAMS
iloveyu xxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
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