A Thought Crossed My Mind

By unni_kumaran

Tue, 10 Aug 2010
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A thought crossed my mind,
Was at the tip of my tongue,
But I lost it.

Perhaps it crossed
My heart
And hoping to die, died there.

Certificate U
Poem
Free Verse
Humour

Comments

Submitted by skinner_jennifer on
Hi unni_kumaran, a thought always crosses my mind, like when I am writing something down for a poem. I will be thinking, 'yes I must write that down, it's good.' But by the time I find a paper and pen, I forget what it was I was going to write. Do you ever get that? Jenny.

 

Submitted by unni_kumaran on
Hi Jenny Thanks for the comments. They are better than cherries that fall from who knows where. Now, there was something else I wanted to say, but cant remeber what. Unni

 

Submitted by Kit_Caless on
Brevity is the soul of wit and all that, and you've nailed it there. Loved the subversion of the the cliched saying. Kit

Submitted by unni_kumaran on
Thank you Kit. Its a good feeling to nail cliches. Unni