Basket Star (Plus: The Newly Discovered 'Cocoa Frog' of Suriname)
By well-wisher
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BASKET STAR ( A type of star fish)
Lost in
a loose
psychedelic
tangle or
tango of tang-
erine limbs or
an Or
-ange organ
Sonata’s notes
whirling ar-
ound and ar-
ound or
a hazy dream,
in a spinning head,
of a blazing forest
with orange smoke
that becomes
ochre paint
swirling in water
or a
lover’s long
red
hair;
so many routes;
so many roots
in the depths
of my mind.
THE NEWLY DISCOVERED COCOA FROG (OF SURINAME)
A cocoa- coloured frog, I am;
the Cocoa frog of Suriname
and, unlike any other frog,
I sit upon a chocolate log;
I sit upon a log and croak-oa
then SPLASH into a lake of cocoa
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I especially like the 'basket
I especially like the 'basket star' one well-wisher.
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Great free-writing around two
Great free-writing around two intriguing animals - after reading this I just had to look up the Cocoa Frog of Suriname. These kind of remind me of some of D H Lawrence's idiosyncratic poems about animals - I love the way you take one as a starting point and then go wild with it. Really enjoyed these.
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I love the image of a cocoa
I love the image of a cocoa frog on a chocolate log! Really cheered me up - worthy of Edward Lear. Have you ever seen this mountain range? I was stunned by its beauty. Something tells me that you'd like it. http://www.huffingtonpost.com/2013/07/31/rainbow-mountains-china-danxia-...
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