Cheetah
By well-wisher
Sun, 12 May 2013
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Within the blink
(Too fast to think;
the cheetah, prince
of wildcats, sprints
with engine grrr;
its coat, a blur
of spotted fur,
it’s here then
there;
so quick, it flies)
of a cat’s eye.
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A strong and effective
Permalink Submitted by maggyvaneijk on
A strong and effective piece, just like the cheetah!
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I like "with the blink of an
I like "with the blink of an eye" as an ending. I like your blurry rhyme scheme. You use small words that rapidly flow. Your form is as fluid as the cheetah's quick strides.
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