The Magnificent Rose
By well-wisher
Tue, 12 Mar 2013
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Like an amphitheatre are your petals red and round;
like the mouth of a spectator going ‘Wow!’;
opening your curtain of bright petals, you astound;
then, like all great performers, you take a bow.
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I enjoyed this! All the
I enjoyed this! All the similes seem apt, and the whole is tersely concise. Rhiannon
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