Promise my heart

By well-wisher

Thu, 23 Feb 2012
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My heart, that looked upon your love,
now dare not close its eyes
for fear it shall not see again
flowers rain from the skies
or rainbows wrap themselves around
a never setting sun.
Oh promise that thou shall not end
this joy our love’s begun.

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Submitted by Silver Spun Sand on
This is lovely;-) Tina

 

Submitted by twoflowers on
I agree with Tina. :)

Submitted by scratch on
Nothing wrong with that well-wisher, nothing at all. Elegant, delightful choice of words rhyme and metre.