She was like a Summer's day

Cherry

By well-wisher

Tue, 05 Jun 2018
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She was like a Summer's day;

like the trees that seem happy in the breeze;

full of hope as the sky;

her eyes like leaves shining in the sun;

her voice like all the sweet melodies of birds;

she was

but now the trees are still;

now the sky is rain;

the leaves are full of shade;

the birds are silent.

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Submitted by Insertponceyfre... on

So simple, but beautiful, thank you wellwisher

ps: you've got a missing apostrophe in Summer's

 

Submitted by well-wisher on

Thank you, insert. I've corrected the mistake you spotted.

Oh look, a link. I wonder where it leads.

JoHn

Submitted by Di_Hard on

this makes me sad though I know nothing of the she you write about

 

Submitted by Shannan on

... but the poetry is alive ;)

Thanks for sharing

 

Submitted by skinner_jennifer on

Mother nature brings her blessings and she bought your meaningful words to us.

Missing the writing that came from your soul JoHn, so I'll savour this poem, while I think of you.

Jenny.