The Sun Collector

By well-wisher

Tue, 04 Jun 2013
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The buzzing bees can never rest;
always upon their nectar quest;
crawling on daffodils and daisies
they must think I am very lazy
just lying on my back and snoozing
while, every flower, they’re perusing
but I’m collecting rays of sun
and my work *yawn* my work is never done.

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Submitted by skinner_jennifer on
Wonderful poem JoHn, those lazy days of Summer. Just perfect like your poem. Jenny.

 

Submitted by scratch on
This is a lovely poem. Beutifully concieved and executed without excess words. Very good.

 

Submitted by well-wisher on
Thanks, Jennifer. I'm more bee-like in my habits, though. I really prefer writing to relaxing. Very glad you enjoyed it.

Oh look, a link. I wonder where it leads.

JoHn

Submitted by well-wisher on
Thank you, Scratch.

Oh look, a link. I wonder where it leads.

JoHn

Submitted by Bee on
I enjoyed reading your poem. Also,I love bees, so that made it special for me. One question relating to your comment to Jennifer, do bees write? Bee
Bee